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Wednesday 21 October 2015

My Sun Poetry

WALT: descriptive poems including Metaphors and Adjectives.
Here is my poem of what I think about the sun.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 October 2015 at 16:57

    Hi Frances lol,
    I like the used descriptive language to make a poem.
    keep it up!

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  2. Anonymous21 October 2015 at 17:02

    Hey Frances
    I like how you use great similes and adjectives in your sun Poetry
    Keep It up

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